Tuesday, June 27, 2006

164/365 Betty

Since her death I remind myself she did the best she could >>>> Did the best she could >>>> The best she could >>>> Best she could >>>> She could >>>> Could >>>> Could >>>> Could >>>> Couldn’t >>>> Couldn’t I >>>> Couldn’t I have >>>> Couldn’t I have tried >>>> Couldn’t I have tried harder?

7 Comments:

Blogger Indigo Bunting said...

Love this.

9:28 AM  
Blogger Bridgett said...

This brought an actual emotional response for me, and I have no idea who Betty even is. Yikes.

4:51 PM  
Blogger ntexas99 said...

eeeeery ... I just posted something on my ntexas99 blog about this very thing ... trying a little harder. This post makes me want to try a little harder.

just
a
little
harder

1:19 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I think Betty will actually have done the best she could in your eyes when you accept that you did. Or that everyone is now, which ever comes first. Time, like all perception, is pretty malluable that way.

11:49 AM  
Blogger In Otter Space said...

Brilliantly composed!

11:27 AM  
Blogger B Kiddo said...

WOW! This one hit home! Awesome!

11:22 AM  
Blogger Cedar said...

This was really great.

8:29 PM  

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